Comfort in a world turned upside-down

Wow, that was a really good poem. I loved the rhythm of it, and the way you expressed complicated concepts through very few words. My favorite stanza was probably,
"Why is it that runningIs looked at with caution,When walking just tells“I’m not sure what you mean”?"

So true. I also liked how you sort-of repeated the first two stanzas as the last two -- it gave me the feeling that the poem had come full circle.

Keep writing!

~Red

I love the reviews of strangers.

It was on this poem, but on Fictionpress.